http://www.flickr.com/photos/justadreamphotography/4282705069/
Thank you!
Here’s what I like: very cute use of the bear.
Now for dislikes:
I’m not a fan of strong vignetting.
Also make sure to completely iron out wrinkles, they’re kinda distracting.
Your cropping seems weird, one time you cut off a third of the baby’s head, another time you cut off his body so only his head was on the bear and he’s looking away from the camera so it seems weird.
I think you should get a nice piece of foamcore to use as a reflector to make the shadows less harsh

cute.
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